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Jayne. by ~bitternsweet:iconbitternsweet:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Portraits & Figures

©2006-2009 ~bitternsweet
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hmmm. ^^;

be as mean as you like, i'm trying to improve.

hair was a rush job, thats why i cropped half of it out, heh.

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~michelle0701 Jun 4, 2006, 8:25:58 PM
wow i think your drawing skills and technique seem excellent! i dont think they are what needs improvement, id say its just proportioning and placement of what you draw. great shading though :thumbsup:
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~karpourighn Jun 4, 2006, 8:26:39 PM
nice skills you've got here :thumbsup: - though i think you've got some of the proportions a little off such as the symetry with the eyes and mouth and nose may be a little fat. other than that i think its an awesome piece. you've got some real tallent :D

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~bitternsweet Jun 4, 2006, 8:28:58 PM
yeh thanks for that :)

i definitely need to sketch things out more before i draw them, i think that's my main problem.
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~OdinPeterson Jun 4, 2006, 8:38:02 PM
At first I thought it was deliberate so if I was you I would say it is ;)
I think you just need to try using a grid, works wonders for placement and proportion.

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"Life isn't about how many moments you draw breath but about the moments that take your breath away."

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:iconbitternsweet:
~bitternsweet Jun 4, 2006, 8:46:56 PM
hahah yeah good idea :blushes:
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~bitternsweet Jun 4, 2006, 8:52:02 PM
woah i just looked at your gallery :blushes:

thanks so much for the helpful comment and favourite, your gallery rendered me absolutely speechless :|

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~OdinPeterson Jun 4, 2006, 8:55:18 PM
lol Thanks, yeah grids help so much,
your rendering technique is spot on yu just need to focus on placement and proportion, placement more so, It's one of the hardest things to get right and is still my main issue, the drawing I am doing today, I have done the right eye twice now and it still looks weird to me

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"Life isn't about how many moments you draw breath but about the moments that take your breath away."

My site - [link]
My gallery - [link]
:ahoy:
:iconosobandido:
~osobandido Jun 5, 2006, 4:04:50 AM
Its really expressive!!!

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~Why so green and lonely?
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